The Vampire Across the Hall-2. The Murmuring Lift

Original, if not odd

I liked the first a bit more but it was a nice read.

Overall: Although I believe this mad an excellant addition to the first in this series, I do not think that it went to the heights it could have. Other than that I think this could become a great series.

Point of View: Just as before you are in the mind of Daisi, seeing things from her viewpoint. I think this makes the story a bit more personal and draws a little more of the reader in.

Voice: This is clearly not a strongpoint for the author as the writing seems a bit timid. But clearly the author has been working on this aspect of their craft.

Character Development: The author has done a wonderful job of bringing the main character back for a seconf story and I look forward to more of Daisi's path in life.

Plot: One word. Flawless

Dialogue: Again not an apparent strong point in the author's armory but the dialogue more or less came through.

Pacing: This is a rather short story so the pace does not really affect one way or the other. It is a light and entertaining read.

Setting: Daisi (haha Author's name is the same as the main character) made a world that seems to be that apartment building right down the block. This could be the life of someone right under your nose. So yess the setting was perfection.

Continuity: Naming the character and the author as one in the same gives this an autobiography feel to it. A nice touch to add to the story.

Just like book 1, this book also made me smile and couldn't wait to start book 3.

Another interesting story, with some nice moments. I like the way this series is shaping up.

Easily read in a few minutes... Has some cliched humor but as a short story it was interesting enough and if there will be more I would like to learn what happens to Daisi next....