Paris After Dark

really good descriptions, likable characters, good progression. However, a particular description, gave away the "culprit" too soon and immediately. The ending came too quick, and was open ended. Will she be ok with what she has to do now?

I could have done without the "F**K" words.

I think much more could have been done with it.

I'm old fashioned, I read to be taken to exotic places, or look at non exotic places in a new light. I like character driven characters. what makes them tick, why do they chose to do what they do, etc.

I looked at 50+ summaries before landing on this one.

I'm tired of the same scenerios-different book.

I don't like that the majority of them are basically women's porno.

I want to read something and have it stay with me some time after because it seemed so real.

I like when someone makes a male character driven by a moral code, not just blatant lust, like in most of them.

But who am I to judge, I can't get my story off the ground.