The confession

Rated 2.00/5 based on 2 reviews
Short story about a mom who goes to her darkest place to protect her son. More
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Words: 3,760
Language: English
ISBN: 9781311899958
Tags: mom protect
About Dani Davis

My name is Dani Davis (Pen)
I am not ready to give out my real name yet. I am from South Mississippi.

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Review by: CJ Puccia on Jan. 11, 2014 :
Interesting plot, but needs some serious editing. I like the "voice" that tells the story and the twist at the end. Worth working on to make it better
(review of free book)

Review by: tony parsons on Jan. 11, 2014 : (no rating)
Set in 1987, at the age of 16 I met Chris Becker (military) quite the musician. He lived on base. Mom had bailed out of the marriage. I had a younger brother Max. Dad worked 2 jobs. I got P/G, & later had a boy; Ryan James Truex. Chris came over for supper & informed me he was being deployed. Chris did not want to get married & he was not coming back. The bad news did not end there for her. What twists/turns will her life go now?
As a former crisis/school social worker how many times have I heard this story in counseling, thank God just not the very ending I never heard from any of my clients. It happens though. This was very easy for me to give this very well written short story (book) 5 stars.
Thank you for the free book (short story)
Tony Parsons MSW (Washburn)
(review of free book)

Review by: Sahara Foley on Jan. 08, 2014 :
You need help with your editing. You also are telling the story, not showing it. You need more dialogue and interaction between the characters. Check out http://www.writing.com/. They are a great help for beginner writers. Good luck in your learning and writing process. Take guts to put a story out there for anyone to read.
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