One Shaky Morning

Rated 2.50/5 based on 2 reviews
A small town girl who is lonely and scared wishes upon a falling star.
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Words: 1,830
Language: English
ISBN: 9781311136657
About Daniel Pyrah

I am new to this writing books and short story scene so I will be a bit rusty at first I hope. I'm Daniel, I live up North with my family. I'm only doing short mini stories until I finish my book of then. I will see what happens after that. I'm happy writing my ideas and stories and sharing them for the public to see. I'm happy for you to add your comments on how i can improve my writing and become better at making my stories come to life.

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Review by: tony parsons on Feb. 24, 2014 :
Elizabeth watched out the window as a sparkly light came across the sky. Her mother was not a good parent. Elizabeth prayed. Elizabeth was out & about & met Rosia.
Cool book cover, great font & writing style. A fairly well written religious type short story (book). It was fairly easy to read/follow from start/finish & never a dull moment. Quite a few twists/turns. No grammar errors, repetitive or out of line sequence sentences. But the story was to jam packed together (paragraphs, indent). Lots of interesting scenarios & a great host of characters. That said I will rate it at 4/5.
Thank you for the free short story (book)
Tony Parsons MSW (Washburn)
(review of free book)

Review by: Barbara Alsop on Feb. 24, 2014 :
This book needs an editor and proofreader. Misspelled words are in nearly every sentence. The story is not complete. It just stops. There is no sense of workmanship in this tale.
(review of free book)

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