on April 20, 2014 :
I could only get through a few pages. This reads like a first draft and could stand some editing. Using "though" at the end of most sentences, sentence fragments, "they're" instead of "their" etc. put me off.
I'm sure with some review and editing it will be fine!
You have to understand, 30 years ago I received a bachelor's degree in Journalism (newspaper) and this may explain why I can't stand typos, let alone incorrect usage of the language. 'Two stars' for effort.
(review of free book)