This was one of the most erotic werewolf stories I've read so far. I was astounded that a single sex scene could last for so long with such vicious, animal passion!
What struck me about this story is the werewolf male, whose form of lovemaking balances his both animal and human sides. Much of his sex is vigorous and violent, yet there's a hint of humanity in the way he teases young Zoey. I found myself reading the story faster and faster, getting swept up in the pacing, wanting to get that same feeling of savaging a lover as a sexy were-beast! I definitely got that feeling, and enjoyed it immensely.
But what's equally surprising is how much Zoey herself seems to descend into being a beast herself. While constantly yearning for her alpha to change her, she displays a bottomless sexual hunger that keeps pace with his - and at times even exceeds it. This kept up the excitement of the story straight through to the end.
There are a few typographical errors, but they only stand out because there aren't too many of them. The story also ends quite abruptly, but such is to be expected for a free first part of an epic saga. There's definitely plenty to be excited about at story's end - it will leave you wanting more!
Overall, a great read with some relentless animal lovemaking!
(review of free book)