I DReaM Free
on Sep. 3, 2017 :
This is a shorty story by Craig McGray at about 11 pages long. So it’s a very quick read. But I have to say that the story didn’t flow well in my opinion. I can’t quite put my finger on what was the problem but it seemed “amateurish” in writing style. There were times where things seemed to have happened without it being told to you the reader.
Overall, it was worth reading even though the plot was pretty easy to figure out and the writing was a bit stilted but at 11 pages you are not out much time to give it a read.
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