When I downloaded the work in Jul 2014 it was titled 'Uncorked'
The new title is better, but the intro is unchanged and awful, The intro is the ending of the story, not the journey. Would you introduce a joke by giving the punchline?
The story has been edited since I downloaded it, removing some conflicts. I have not read the new version, but for the most part I found the story well written, I imagine the rework improved it.
I suggest modifying the intro to define the journey.
(review of free book)