Element of Life

Adult
Rated 5.00/5 based on 2 reviews
Just who is going to hear your scream in a post apocalyptic world? More
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Todd Marscher reviewed on on Aug. 13, 2014

Wow, this is by far the best free story I've read (in this category). I am a huge fan of weird fiction and here I found the epitome of it. This story really got me emotionally involved until I reached this line: "“It’s dirty. Period.” Sais Brock."" THIS! turned me into a hyena on the inside, as I was laughing so hard (even though I wasn't really supposed to) that I remained breathless (It was a silent laugh though... That's why "the hyena" is on the inside XD )

And by the way, leaving the pitch-black humor aside, the message behind this insanity is really impressive actually. Although I'm not into this 'new thought' thing, I really appreciate the way the message is "enveloped". I find it really unique to combine horror with inspirational stuff, but as long as it is entertaining, I guess anything goes, right?

Final thought: Although this is a marvelous and super-unique story, here is one thing that could be better (and I mean a LOT better). It's the cover. Seriously, it is way too simple and pain. The story is too good to be represented by such a cover.
(review of free book)
James Read reviewed on on Aug. 9, 2014

WEIRD!!!

Here's one single word that can describe the whole story: WEIRD. And I really enjoy weird stories (seriously, this one is the definition of twisted) that actually have a message to promote. I find this really philosophical and entertaining. The part where it compares the human body with a sponge was a total blast; if you think about it, it makes sense (ha ha).

Also, I loved the dialogue and found it actually funny in a lot of parts (even where it was not supposed to).

About characters I'll have to say that I liked the main character better before his transformation, because after, he was scarier than the opressors (even though he was supposed to be something like an enlightened being or so).

All in all, this story managed to get the "yucks" out of me so it gets 5 stars.
(review of free book)
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