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A group of teens go into an attic and find an old Venetian mask, which soon reveals its all-consuming secret. More
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About Crystal Coons

Crystal is primarily a writer of non-mimetic fiction, and she aspires to change the way women are presented and perceived in media. A writer of almost all formats, Crystal’s desires, as well as her stories, are not limited by the method of presentation. She is a strong writer of visuals and often applies mythological aspects to her writing, granting another layer of depth and wonder to the stories she tells.

Currently, Crystal’s main project is her work titled Mob Princess, which she aspires to put onto the big screen as a feature film. Along with this, she is working in tandem with several others to develop an independent horror game, and hopes to see the project finished soon

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Richard Tabaka reviewed on on Dec. 7, 2014

Crystal Coons cranks up the action with a powerful short. Well done.
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Robert Zimmermann reviewed on on Oct. 31, 2014

For such a short story, the author packed in a heavy punch. There's no time wasted to terrify the reader with what this mysterious mask has in store for these teenagers. I'd have liked a little more of a lead-up, if only to understand the mask and how the grandmother obtained it (and why she'd have such a dangerous object), but aside from that I think this was a great read. It's a very strong flash piece.
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Jeff McDargh reviewed on on Oct. 25, 2014

Great job. I'm like Cyril I would have liked a little more.
Thank you.
And as the father of two girls more power to you, I'm behind you.
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Adarsh reviewed on on Oct. 23, 2014

Hi Crystal Coons, your story was good. Better luck for you as a first time editor. Wish you luck for your future endeavors. Try to write long stories/novels. Because it will help to root tight the characters in readers mind. Waiting for more from you. Good Luck
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LaurieG433 reviewed on on Oct. 22, 2014

Wow ... This would make a great scary movie 😱.
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