on March 10, 2010 :
Another thrilling tale, only this time, with supernatural elements. I found this piece highly creative and like Dampier Falls, I really enjoyed it. Very creepy, loved the gore, and a great conclusion.
My (respectful) critisicm of structure is still in place with this story. The creative talent this writer has is as good as they come, but the writing itself needs some improvements.
Amanda, you have endless potential. Even though you have ruined any chance of me camping again due to your other story, you have a fan in me. It would be really cool if you did a few more of these stories, cleaned them up, and put them in an actual multi-storied book. I think it would be highly successful. I've had a blast reading your stories and I hope to see more.
Dan Fitzpatrick, Author
Vision: Evan's Book & VisionII: The Black Skull
(review of free book)