Val

Rated 3.00/5 based on 1 reviews
As if taking what mattered most to me wasn't enough, i was made to waste 11 years of my life. Now, I'd pay back the favor in Kind...it wont be as long as 11 years, just one tiny sharp pain and they would be out of their misery. Bill settled, debt PAID IN FULL. More
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Words: 13,750
Language: American English
ISBN: 9781310768262
About Gabriel Pope

Gabriel Pope is a young African writer. He is the Author of With Love From Santa which peaked at #14 Bestseller for Teen and Young Adult category while it was Free. He spends his writing time on creating short stories since school engulfs all the other space. He tries out pretty much every genre and his current project is a collection that should be up by summer. Meanwhile, i'm publishing a story every month so...

Let's just keep our fingers crossed... ;)

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Review by: Tony Spencer on March 13, 2015 :
VAL is a short story, from a new young writer, that is full of action from start to finish. Set in the near future within a criminal underground organisation, one rotten to the core, posing as a top pharmaceutical conglomerate and what happens following a drug deal that went wrong. The overlords exact their price of failure; with Val, an innocent babe, taking the fall. After eleven years in the slammer the babe replaces innocence with downright mean.

The story rips along, with murder and mayhem at every step, so if a roller coaster ride is what you want in a book, and you can make the height restriction, then this is your baby!

The text is raw, with a few spelling and grammar errors but that barely takes the gloss off; with a little polish it'll be fine. This story is a free hint to what is to come from this pen. Another promising young author who I am sure will collect that polish in time.
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