I think the authors' skill is shown in a short piece of work.
Sometimes fewer words are better.
I enjoyed it very much and I can understand Ivan Popov when he said 'no characters'. It would be an interesting perspective through the eyes of a single person. This is how someone else would have done it; but the author chose to write it this way.
Getting back to the written story; as it stands it is wonderfully presented. A 5 star write.
(review of free book)