on April 22, 2015 :
There are some stories which gives a way or hint to authors for another story. That is, an idea generating one.
The story was good at the first few portions. But it collapsed at the end. No reason for the cause that had happened in the building. The protagonist hears dome noises and ran from there. So I'm not satisfied with the climax. You should have expand the story a little bit.
The line: "Walking to the door you can smell the flowers and what seems to be the smell of fresh made bread. I thought that someone could have been making something in the house giving me a surprise welcome. Though when I open the door to the house there is no one there, and not only was no one there the smell of bread was gone." Was perfect. Really idea provoking. It affected me in some way. Good luck.
(review of free book)