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Deborah Kalin is an award-winning writer of literary speculative fiction, author of the collection Cherry Crow Children and The Binding novels. Her work has won two Aurealis Awards and has been shortlisted for the Shirley Jackson Awards, the Ditmar Awards and the Australian Shadows Awards.
She lives in Melbourne, subject to the whims of a toddler who thinks she's a cat and a cat who thinks she's a person. Both of them whinge, mostly about sleep and food. (The toddler wants less of each, the cat more. Both want more outside time.) Kalin herself hasn't slept uninterrupted through the night since March 2012.
Francis W. Porretto
on April 16, 2015 :
I’m of two minds about this story. On the one hand, the premise is original and fresh, the setting and the implied milieu are intriguing, and the co-protagonists are unusual enough to be appealing even when they’re in opposition to one another. On the other, you have some fairly serious stylistic problems, and the eventual awakening of Sal is too obvious from the early going. So while I enjoyed the story, I can’t give it five stars.
Two specific bits of advice:
1) Don’t try so hard to “write like a writer.”
2) Avoid participial constructions; they’re awkward and occasionally jarring.
(reviewed the day of purchase)