Since you were kind enough to review one of my stories I want to reciprocate in kind. That said, I did not understand this one at all. The writing was clear and the narrative flowed, but I could not grasp the point. Probably my not being a 'young adult' had something to do with it.
As this review does not give you a fair shake, I'll try out a few of your other stories and see how they go.
(review of free book)