on Aug. 15, 2015 :
I like the idea of a game like world setting and the story is decent.
The flow of the story is smooth at the very least, I didn't experience any jarring moments though out the book.
I do have some problems with the characters, the way they warm up to the MC is kinda fast. If it were in the Real world would you warm up to another person this quickly?
I found 2 spelling mistakes in the book and while I would normally dismiss this in a free series, for a paid series this doesn't sit well. The of the mistakes is "The fight (drug) on for twenty minutes", you can see where it looks weird right?
All in all I like the way the story is going and look forward to buying the rest of the series... (Well ok I already bought the first 4 in a shot but I am biased towards this genre)
(reviewed the day of purchase)