Late One Night

Rated 3.50/5 based on 4 reviews
A lone traveler arrives at an old house in the middle of the night. Even creepier than the house is the man who lives there. But not everything is as it seems. This is a flash fiction story, and it's about 980 words long.
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Words: 1,170
Language: American English
ISBN: 9781311854896
About Ruth Ann Nordin

I am a stay-at-home mom of four school-aged boys and the proud wife of a veteran of the US Air Force. I live in Montana where I am fortunate to spend my days creating new worlds with characters I fall in love with. I have written fifty romances and have plans to write many more in the years to come.

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Review by: Andre' Mwansa on Oct. 10, 2017 :
Nice turn of things, but just like the other reviews, IT WAS RUSHED.
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Review by: Simi Chatterjee on July 09, 2017 :
Nice try.
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Review by: David Blake on Aug. 02, 2015 :
There's a good story in here somewhere, but I don't think Ruth Nordin tells it to its best potential. For a start, the descriptions are few and far between, leaving me with practically no idea as to what Alicia or the house looked like, or what kind of area the house is in. There are some odd turns of phrase, such as 'the kind of smile a vulture might give to its prey'... Do vultures smile?
The dialogue and actions played out in a very unconvincing manner, for me. For example, a woman turns up at a house wanting to use the telephone, she is invited to stay there that night and she is shown up to the room and left there with virtually no conversation taking place... How does the man know she's even ready to go to bed? Why not offer her some refreshment? The whole thing just lacked any sense of reality, somehow, which lessened the impact of the twist.
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Review by: Jessica Fox on July 16, 2015 :
Decent. Hint given in middle of story was a little too obvious.
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