Just finished reading this and omg, its turned into one of those stories where I'll be checking for the next to find out what happens next. Is in need of some editing but not so bad you can't follow along, just bits here and there. Its a very good story if someone who reads as much as I do likes it but seems like if you would have read it yourself one more time that you could've fixed those mistakes before puting this out. Its all good though loved the story and can't wait for the next!
(reviewed 5 days after purchase)