WHO AM I?? My name is Iqra Tariq.I am currently a student of dow medical college,Karachi,Pakistan. My father's name is Shafqat Ali Tariq. He is also a doctor from Dow medical college. My mother's name is Rashida Tariq
on April 28, 2011 :
Candle in her hands could have and should have been a great story. I believe it has the potential. The start was good. However the grammar and the fact that there were no paragraphs was a problem. Another eg. The girls feet don't gloat across the ground they float. The best thing to do is always read your work out loud to hear how it reads at least twice. Then upload another version. More of a goal is needed to be written for a more fulfilling end. Good luck.
(review of free book)
on April 27, 2011 :
It was short, so it is not surprising that it said nothing.