Patch Pirates Ketchup

Rated 4.50/5 based on 4 reviews
The crew need some supplies and stop on the wrong Island. Lucky for them there is no ketchup to be found.
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Price: Free! USD

Words: 960
Language: English
About Dean Derkson

Born in Canada in 1967.
Suffered from the cold and high taxes for many years.
Got the heck out.
Currently a teacher in South Korea that wants to retire very very young.
This current Pirate writing binge will probably make me $3.95 when all is said and done.
Also I'll be able to find my name in more places on the Internet.

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Reviews

Review by: Linda Arditto on Dec. 08, 2013 :
Brilliant piece of work with humor. Errors are easily fixed.
5 stars again :))
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Review by: Samantha Kirk on Nov. 05, 2013 :
Another delightful story from this author. My grandaughter is going to have so much to read.
I don't think page numbers really mattered, it didn't take away from the story.
I guess ebook readers are spoilt.
I enjoyed it. Highly recommended.
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Review by: Linda Culbreth on May 14, 2011 :
A story my sons would have loved when they were in elementary school - especially if they were out of ketchup.
Linda Culbreth
http://bookdesignbylinda.com
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Review by: Jon Hartford on May 01, 2011 :
Witty, sarcastic, and slightly dark humor. I laughed.

Some small criticisms: For ebooks, you don't need (or want) page numbers, since the text is re-flowed in most formats, so they don't match up anyway. There are a few places where punctuation is missing. (e.g. "Wow look at the poles[...]" probably needs a comma or exclamation point after the interjection "Wow".) And "The natives lead them to their village." is present tense ("led" would be past). But now I'm just being a grammar Nazi...

Also, ketchup rules!
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