No Rent

Adult Erotica
Rated 1.00/5 based on 1 reviews
Sometimes a young woman just needs an alternative to paying the rent.

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About Candace Mia

Candace Mia lives on a farm in the Midwest. She spends her days taking care of animals and tending fields. At night, she likes to curl up with a good erotica tale. She has recently decided to try her hand at writing stories of her own. She hopes that you enjoy the products of her wandering mind.

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Reviews

Grey Pen reviewed on on Aug. 11, 2015

While browsing through some of the erotic tales going for free, I asked myself, "How bad could one of these be?" One look at the title, and the blurb let me know immediately that I would be in for a treat. (HINTHINT, YOU SPELL 'SOMETIMES' WITHOUT AN APOSTROPHE.)

Right from the get go, I could tell that the author didn't care at all about what she was writing. The descriptions for everything were told from a disinterested onlooking standpoint rather than feeling like they were from the first person and making any sort of attempt to blend into each other. Starting almost every sentence in a paragraph with "she" indicates that something is wrong and only makes the writing come off as more and more stilted as the story goes on.

The dialogue, magically considering there's very little, comes off as awkward and makes me feel like I'm reading a cheap porno instead of an erotica that doesn't have to rely on the actors' talents to work off each other for convincing conversation.

Needless to say, it was also obvious that the writer was a woman and had never given a single thought to how getting a blowjob would actually /feel/ but rather knew how one looks. "Girl takes dick into mouth, sucky sucky, and he comes in her mouth," no emotion, no hint that the person receiving the BJ is on any sort of pleasure.

But hey, most people don't have as high standards as I do, so maybe you'll like it anyway. For me though? Glad it was free.
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