Dan Devine is the speculative fiction author of the Cull Chronicles and other stories. A graduate of Cornell University, he holds degrees in Chemistry and History and he generally makes his living trying to pretend he knows something about science.
on Sep. 26, 2015 :
This is a good first draft. The language is like having a foam block, marked out, but the cutting, and filling hasn't been done.
Quote: "I leapt over the prone form of a trooper who came sliding down the stairs and sprinted forward, pushing men in front of me."
This sequence of events makes zero sense.
Saying this, it isn't horrible, and with work, it could have been very good.
(review of free book)