Finding Finnegan

Rated 3.00/5 based on 1 reviews
Leave it to the conventional forces to always screw things up.

The locals tell them about the village shaman, and they just laugh and charge in firing; don't call us until half of their squad's been torn apart by zombies and skeletons.

Lieutenant Finnegan is missing. His men tell me they last saw him heading into that desecrated church. The one that just reeks of dark arts.

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Words: 6,500
Language: English
ISBN: 9781310772054
About Daniel Devine

Dan Devine is the speculative fiction author of the Cull Chronicles and other stories. A graduate of Cornell University, he holds degrees in Chemistry and History and he generally makes his living trying to pretend he knows something about science.

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Review by: BD Branchy on Sep. 26, 2015 :
This is a good first draft. The language is like having a foam block, marked out, but the cutting, and filling hasn't been done.

Quote: "I leapt over the prone form of a trooper who came sliding down the stairs and sprinted forward, pushing men in front of me."

This sequence of events makes zero sense.

Saying this, it isn't horrible, and with work, it could have been very good.
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