on Nov. 13, 2015 :
A couple of moderately significant editing/formatting issues.
1. A few places where the same paragraph or two are repeated.
2. First person narrative changes are occasionally too subtle. Takes a while to figure out who is talking.
I liked the story, and would rate it at 4 stars, but the work needs some cleanup editing.
The intro is accurate, though PTA and FBI are background concepts rather than intricate parts of the work.
I found the story plausible, interesting and fun. A couple of plot twists here and there, that worked well. I will be looking for other works by the author.
(review of free book)