Bacorium Legacy

Rated 4.44/5 based on 9 reviews
The death of Luca's father has set him on a path of vengeance, seeking a magic blade with the power to slay the evil lord Zinoro. When his life is saved by a beautiful young woman, Luca must choose between his mission to avenge his father, and his desire to be with and protect this girl. However, secrets are everywhere, and nothing is as it seems... More

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adipxy3 reviewed on on April 4, 2017

great story
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Sfaith77 reviewed on on April 13, 2016

The story sucked me in right away. The plot twists were creative. Good character development.
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L.E. Horn reviewed on on Jan. 10, 2016

A good story and interesting characters marred by a desperate need for editing. Spelling errors, messy sentences and small plot flaws distract from what would otherwise be an enjoyable read. I would love to see a second, well edited version of this story!
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Jasmine Shea Townsend reviewed on on Dec. 18, 2015

The story-telling gets 3.5 stars. I'll admit, I was hooked. The only reason it didn't score higher was because there were times when the author used convenient plot devices, and when characters acted out-of-character in order to move the plot along.

However! The writing itself gets 1.5 stars. This story really had a lot of potential. It would have been so much better had there been any sign of editing. There were countless spelling errors and omitted words. There were awkward phrases and too many cliches. There were also too many phrases that needed to be cut down, or cut out completely. For example, I can't count how many times I read, "briefest of moments."

So, because I found the story enjoyable enough to read even through the terrible writing, I'll give it 3 stars over all.
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yvonne yap reviewed on on Dec. 16, 2015

It takes some time for me to get into the story and a very long one at that...Its a good read, thank you for making it free.
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Birdisbeautiful reviewed on on Nov. 29, 2015

I loved the story and often I was transplanted into the characters world! I can't wait to read the next one!!
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Jon Snow reviewed on on Nov. 20, 2015

A great read
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nour hesham reviewed on on Nov. 18, 2015

Beautifully done, thank you.
Feel free to get back to me anytime at nour2.hesham@hotmail.com Mr. Marco 👍
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Marco Lawrence reviewed on on Nov. 15, 2015

Thanks great book!
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