Trust Me

Rated 3.50/5 based on 2 reviews
Scott asks Amanda for one thing. Her trust. But can she give it to him?
A short story.
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Words: 1,610
Language: English
ISBN: 9781311012074
Tags: trust twist
About B. Fowler

B is currently a college student who enjoys writing in her free time. Other hobbies include wasting egregious amounts of time on StumbleUpon and facebook.

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Review by: David Wittlinger on Jan. 03, 2016 :
This is a short story about two kids of indeterminate age who are faced with a potential disaster and how they react to it. I suppose the term 'cautionary tale' would apply here.

In the interest of constructively helping the author I'll register a few concerns. One, it took me several paragraphs to comprehend that the two main characters were children...and then I still had no idea just how old they were supposed to be. The bridge should be described in more detail when Amanda reaches it as the reader has no idea if its a highway bridge or a narrow pedestrian one. In some cases less isn't more. Those critiques aside the author does prove she can write decently and shows promise.
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Review by: Samantha Cook on Jan. 01, 2016 :
Loved it. There were a few places where i think commas could have been placed to make the flow of the sentences smoother, but then again, I may just be not used to your style.

It's a great little story showing what could happen when you try to act on your best intentions, and somehow, things go completely wrong.

Very good.
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