This story seems aimed at youngish teenagers. It is a tale of love and loss and resolution.
There are illogical parts, as pointed out by hrhsophia, but younger readers would probably not notice them.
There are very many similar stories aimed at teenagers, and for this one to be recommended, editing should have been done by someone more proficient in English.
New readers need to be immersed in correct language, for it to become automatic. The better their language skills, the better chances they have of getting on in life, be it in school or later employment.
Some passages in this tale could pass as colourful writing (..pulled her legs up onto the chair and covered her face in them..) Others were a bit less charming (...didn't say anything with betrayed eyes...) And then others just jarred (..What do you got to lose?..)
I give this 2 stars as there there is promise of a good writer emerging.
(review of free book)