Bitten

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When Ally becomes a newly single woman, she is determined to meet the man of her dreams. Never truly expecting it to actually occur, she is amaze to find herself drawn to a dark, mysterious stranger leaning against the bar. He was utterly irresistible.

Despite her friends’ protests, she willingly follows him outside the bar and soon realizes that her world will never be the same again. More
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Published: May 20, 2011
Words: 14,700
Language: English
ISBN: 9781458111609
About Merrill Gemus

Merrill Gemus is an independent author and self-publisher who creates short stories, novels and mini-series on her spare time.

She started blogging in January 2009 and developed an interest in writing in August 2009.

She has completed her first short story, The Call, which is loosely based on her own high school romance.

Recently, she concluded book one and two of her vampire miniseries, called “Bitten” and "Stolen" respectively. Each novella within the series will illustrates the love between Alice and Benedict and how they will need to overcome politics, jealousy and danger to protect their bond.

Merrill is currently working on the third and final installment of “Bitten” series.

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Review by: theresa wyland on Sep. 20, 2013 : (no rating)
I loved this!!
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Review by: Meka Sparks on Aug. 25, 2013 : star star star star star
I enjoyed this book.
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Review by: C B on May 07, 2013 : star star
didn't care for it
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Review by: C B on May 07, 2013 : star star
didn't care for it
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Review by: rachael mott on Nov. 16, 2012 : star star
not very good, from the time she leaves the club it goes downhill.
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Review by: frances on Aug. 06, 2012 : star star star star
I liked this first book of the series!
I read the second one too and I'm waiting for the third
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Review by: kimberly devall on June 24, 2012 : (no rating)
Loved this book!
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Review by: Nancy Wilson on May 08, 2012 : star star star star star
Great book. Looking forward to more.
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Review by: Chastine Perkins on Feb. 24, 2012 : (no rating)
This was a very enjoyable book. can't wait for the next one :)
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Review by: Pj clarke on Dec. 25, 2011 : star star star star
Can't wait to read the next part. Ally is a very likable character and one you want to see win in the end. Amazing imagery I couldn't put it down just kept coming back once I started reading.
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Review by: deanlaura on Oct. 21, 2011 : star star star star star
Loved what there was...Ally is an interesting, sympathetic character. More, please!
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Review by: Angie Reynolds on Oct. 19, 2011 : star star star star star
Great story, whish it had an ending.
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Review by: maggie Malia on Oct. 11, 2011 : star star star star star
I need to know what happens now
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Review by: Dee Wauneka on Sep. 19, 2011 : star star star star
liked the book , so much passion and wanting to know what happens next
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Review by: T.M. Johnson on Sep. 11, 2011 : star star star star star
I liked it. It was short and sweet. You got to know the characters but the ending is what got me. I really am dieing to know what happens next.
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Review by: reinette coetzee on July 31, 2011 : (no rating)
Great story, really enjoyed it but need to know what happened. Don't leave us out in the cold.
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Review by: LuMary Galletti on July 26, 2011 : star star star star star
Thank you for a great read! It was entertaining, fun and the end killed! I cannot wait for the rest of the story... part two isn't here fast enough!!! =) I can't believe you would leave us hanging like that with such an ending but I guess it was your way of grabbing our attention. Well, you surely grabbed our attention!!! I give it five stars because even though it is a vampire novella (supposedly overdone), the story line is different from the normal happy ending romances and overdone human-vampire love affair. I say BRAVO and keep them coming!!!
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Review by: Sheyenne Kirby on July 17, 2011 : star star star star
The idea behind the story was pretty good. Story could've been told a little bit better. Right as it picked up, it ended. I have to admit the following a hot guy around seemed a little out there especially when he announces that he's a vampire and Ally is his mate. Again it was a good read to pass the time and I can't wait to see what happens.
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Review by: arlene rosenberg on July 09, 2011 : star star star star
Although this shows a lot of promise,the ending was so off the wall even for a cliff-hanger. I would give this 3.5-4 stars and I can't wait for the sequel.I think this writer has potential and I will look for her/his other works.
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Review by: Carrie on June 24, 2011 : star star star star star
A good story. I am hoping for another. I need to know what happens.
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Review by: Kaitlyn Spencer on June 23, 2011 : star star star star star
I really loved this book I dident like the ending but if the next one comes out soon I will be happy :D
PLEASE BRING OUT THE NEXT BOOK SOON I REALY ENJOYED IT
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Review by: Emily Andersson on June 18, 2011 : star star star
it's starts out good. the girl gets dumped (but doesn't care), is beautiful and goes out on the town too find mr. right. she finds him, but has too chase him. She later finds out that he's a vampire and unfortunately is betrothed too another. the story is good most of the time, but the writing wasn't. wrong words, wrong tempus (was, instead of is, etc.). Had to figure out the correct words myself. Have to say that the ending is a good and an exiting one. Can't wait for the continuation. However, I hope the author uses spelling check or askes someone else too proof read it before they publish it.
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Review by: BJ Gaskill on June 10, 2011 : star star star star star
For a short read, this story begins great....woman goes for the hot stranger....the other woman finds out...gets totally ticked.....now.....we wait...URGH!!!!!
Please be so kind as to finish the story :0)
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Review by: mona lisa on June 10, 2011 : star star
When you name a character "Mr Sexy Vampire" it all goes down hill from there. It had some potential to be a good story but to have Ally follow some random guy then go to his place without much chemistry and then to be purposed as his "true mate". Theres a difference between far fetched and totally unbelievable.
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Review by: Shantell Morris on June 05, 2011 : star star star
The book started out ok. I thought Ally was crazy to go out the back alley of a club alone with no one knowing where she was and stalking some random guy because he was hot. But I had to see how it turned out. Then just as the book was getting quite interesting, it ended mid thought. It was as if someone ripped off the other half of the book. Suggestion: If this is going to be a series it would be better if at least that last scene was completed so that the reader doesn't feel like they are missing pages. I want to read part two so please hurry.
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Review by: debra wright on June 02, 2011 : star star star star star
Loved the book, hate that i have to wait for the next installment.
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Review by: Fenris Fenrir on May 25, 2011 : (no rating)
Interesting! i'm excited for the sequel of this book . nice !
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Review by: Kat D. on May 24, 2011 : star star star star star
I loved how this book started out and I am so looking forward to more of this book!!!! Please write the rest soon!!!
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Review by: Melanie Wells on May 23, 2011 : star star star star star
This book was great. I am guessing Book Two is just around the corner? I'm looking forward to it!
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Review by: Mark Stewart on May 21, 2011 : star star star star
Quite a good read.
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Review by: Delaney Spencer on May 21, 2011 : (no rating)
This was a COMPLETE waste of my time! What was this? Is it the first part of a book? There is no ending!! It had a lot of promise, was just getting interesting and just stopped! If you really want to enjoy a fully written story, this is not it. It was like a partial book to get you hooked; then just left you dangling and said "the end". How awful!
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