I couldn't take one more "whilst" so I quit at twenty percent. Not joking, the author must have used the word no less than twice a page. Adding to the misery was the plain bad writing. Who was speaking was a constant guessing game that required the reader to stop and try to figure it out. When you combine that with abrupt, disjointed scene changes there was no flow to the story at all.
Sorry but this books gets a "don't waste your time" rating from me.
(review of free book)