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Adult Erotica
Rated 5.00/5 based on 3 reviews
Sal Guarani's lovely young accountant has stolen more than half a million dollars. The time-honored solution is to bury her body in a shallow grave deep in the desert. But his computer security genius announces that he wants to quit. The horny young man is unhappy with his solitary life. Sal can solve both problems at the same time. Give the girl to the geek. What could possibly go wrong? More

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About Ashley Zacharias

I am a post-modern woman who lives a vanilla life but fantasizes about adventures in masochism. I appreciate readers who purchase my books but, more than money, I need your honest response to my writing. Review my books or contact me at ashleyzacharias.com and let me know what you think of my stories. Good or bad, as long as you are not indifferent, your honest response will help me to write more and better stories.
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grumbler reviewed on Jan. 23, 2020

This is my favorite Ashley Zacharias book so far, and I've read most of them. The protagonist is very relatable, the dilemma she finds herself in is very believable, and the resolution follows very naturally from the actions the reader sees her take. There is some kinky stuff here, but it is in service to the story rather than the reverse.

If I were reading a draft of the book, I'd make two suggestions to the author:
1. Make the consequences of the heroine's realization that she gets sexually excited when she gets ordered around a bigger part of the plot (make it add to her dilemma; does she even want to escape from her situation?) and leave open as long as possible the possibility that she could choose to stay on this path, and
2. Make the story climax more elaborate; have some elements of it go awry, so the heroine has to adjust her plans (and demonstrate her genius once again) to make her solution work. As it is, the story climax is a bit anticlimactic (at least compared to our expectations at that point).

But those weak points don't detract much from this book. The pleasure of the book comes from seeing the main character grow in character and inner strength under the pressures of a horrible situation. Her increasing awareness of the power of her own sexuality eventually morphs into a realization that, contrary to her views at the beginning, her situation is not hopeless and she is not powerless to affect her fate. This is a common Zacharias book element, but we generally only see it happening over the course of several books. I think seeing it happen over the course of a single book makes it better.

Highly recommended.
(reviewed 2 days after purchase)
Mike Shepherd reviewed on July 9, 2017

This was a quite erotic story, blending suspense with nudity, semi-forced sex and occasional BDSM. The gal is very savvy as she works on getting herself out of the mess she got into with the best of intentions. I liked the options that the ending gave me for something more. Well worth the money and the time. I suggest it wholeheartedly.
(reviewed 15 days after purchase)
curmudgeon reviewed on Aug. 28, 2016

Excellent story, well written. Recommended.
(reviewed 5 months after purchase)
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