Ray Holland is a writer who lives and works in Louisville, KY. His hobbies include sleeping, watching movies, sleeping, reading, sleeping, writing, and sleeping. He's married to a lovely woman and has three beautiful children, all of whom are good writers.
on June 04, 2011 :
This story is front loaded with exposition, and the details are flat. The scene where the movers are trying to charge the protagonist for everything is somewhat humorous, but not enough to help out the rest.
(review of free book)