poems from within

Rated 4.00/5 based on 2 reviews
Poems i have writtin, if you dont like them than that is fine, i am just expressing myself by sharing my thoughts in these poems. I like critique so if you have advice, please inform me. Thank you for viewing.
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About Heather Perretti

My name is Heather, i am 25 years old, and i love to write. My passion on paper. I am a mother to a 4 year old. I've had heart ache and tragedies but here I still stand strong.

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Review by: Kristina Howells on June 9, 2011 :
Lovely book with deep meaningful poetry. The spelling in the description left one to wonder about it. Which is a shame, as it is a nice little work. The writer has potential, but needs to know how to format the work too.

There are a lot of people that are good at formatting and helping a new writer. Maybe that would improve the negative opinion. I see your work as having great potential. Don't get down hearted by negative criticism. Most critics are not writers, they are the worst ones.

I look forward in seeing more of your work. If you need help then please ask. There are more than enough people willing to help.
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Review by: Ernest Winchester on June 9, 2011 : (no rating)
Heather, you requested more feedback so I will endeavor to do so. First let me say that I do like certain aspects of your writing. It is clear and lucid. You have not fallen into the trap that many young writers do of writing as if they were tweeting or what ever that damnable stuff is that so many do. I’m an old fuddy-duddy I know, but I have a lot of respect for the English language and would like others to do likewise. Language must change if it is to grow and reach new heights, not sag into a quagmire of sludge.

My reference to worrying about you has to do with the dark and sinister tone of the stories, ‘Within the Seams,’ and ‘Lustful Desires.’ You of course, have every right to use whatever style or genre you choose and I hope you could become the next E. A. Poe.

Now I must reverse myself here, for I just read the Ebook description of your latest posting, ‘Poems From Within.’ You must realize that the description is the first exposure the reader has of you and your work. This one is riddled with punctuation and spelling errors. Run everything that you write through spell check to get it right before posting. You will seem much more professional that way. Please rework it and repost it so I will know you will take my advice to heart. Do not expect reviewers to only heap praise on your work. It is a way for you to learn and improve so long as they are honest. Not all are, sorry to say. Writers have to develop a thick skin to ward off the slings and arrows…well, you know the rest. I want to say that I wish you the best with your writing and keep at it. Practice is the only way to improve.

P S. I didn’t read any of, ‘Poems From Within,’ because poetry is not my thing as a rule, (Ogden Nash aside.) Again good luck and keep at it.
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Review by: Daniel L. Lowery on June 9, 2011 :
I enjoyed the insight of this short work. I would like to see a longer piece from this author.
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