The shock and awe of everyday life. The strange and familiar. All of this comes alive in my fiction. I am a southern writer that wants to follow in the footsteps of modern southern writers like Ron Rash and Daniel Woodrell.
on July 06, 2011 :
The story started choppy and too much telling. If you can get past that, it's not a terrible read. There are a couple of sequence issues such as when she gets up off the bed and away from it, she mentions she couldn't find a heartbeat. She never checked for one, but if she had it would have been done before she got off the bed.
The end made no sense whatsoever. She called this guy to see if she could go over, claiming she needed a place to stay as if her couch wasn't an option and his response made no sense neither did hers after that. The story ends abruptly as if it's not finished.
(review of free book)