Born August 28 1997
Being an avid reader, I try to make full use of what I read(reading is a better teacher, you learn without you having to experience or anything) so I write for fun and creativity.
on Nov. 06, 2016 :
A police procedural effectively told.
"Mike bumped into Tina. Tina was a black seductive woman, who Mike sometimes bonked when bored with his wife Cathrine." This struck me as so funny and at the same time so wrong. It reveals much about the character.
I know this is ESL but there are some errors with grammar and punctuation which, if corrected, would make this a perfect tale. One glaring error is where people say "Am" instead of "I am."
(review of free book)