When Cathrine Anderson is found dead by a maid in hotel room 504, detective Gustavo Black steps in. All evidence at the scene points out to rape and a drug deal gone bad but when her husband Mike Anderson is interviewed, he confesses something that sends the detective on a hunt. Find out in this short story of Homicide Hotel.
on Nov. 6, 2016 :
A police procedural effectively told.
"Mike bumped into Tina. Tina was a black seductive woman, who Mike sometimes bonked when bored with his wife Cathrine." This struck me as so funny and at the same time so wrong. It reveals much about the character.
I know this is ESL but there are some errors with grammar and punctuation which, if corrected, would make this a perfect tale. One glaring error is where people say "Am" instead of "I am."