I enjoyed this story almost as much as the first, even though it was so sad! I'm glad that Achilles isn't exactly abusing her but that Paula and everyone else (except Achilles' parents) know that this isn't right and Achilles isn't a good person. I'm a little sad that Apollo is so unforgiving about this, even though he knows Paula was struck with an arrow. It doesn't seem fair to expect her to fight off the same love spell he was unable to fight off, and even if she could, Achilles still would have kidnapped her. It's not like Paula could fight him off. But aside from that, it was good and I can't wait to read more.
(review of free book)