The Punt

Rated 2.00/5 based on 2 reviews
The author (Agent 33) and his teenage son (Agent 66) are passing an American football in their back yard on a fall day in east Charlotte (USA). When dad kicks the ball - errantly - an aerial dilemma ensues. A possible remedy crashes out.

Approx. 1500 words.

If this tale were a movie, it would most likely be rated PG-13 (foul language).

Another one in the psecret psociety pshort pstory pseries. More
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Words: 1,520
Language: English
ISBN: 9781370850662
About Mike Bozart

Mike Bozart was born in the tidewater area of Virginia (US Navy kid) on a hot afternoon in 1964. He attended a mix of public and Catholic grade schools. After graduating with an Earth Science degree from UNC-Charlotte in 1986, he started doing safety technical writing.

Former residences in North Carolina include Raleigh, Greensboro, Wilmington, Carolina Beach, Etowah and Asheville. Charlotte is his current residence. He has also lived in downtown San Francisco (early '90s).

Mike has written numerous surreal poem-stories and over a dozen 1500-word quasi-real short stories under the psecret psociety heading. Gold, his first novel, was rough-drafted in just 27 days during a seven-week period (May 23 – July 11, 2013).

Mike's first novella was To Morrow Tomorrow (2014); his second was Mysterieau of San Francisco (2015).

Mike does artwork under the nom de brosse of m. van tryke.

The author is happily remarried (Sharon) with a son (Kirk).

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Reviews

Review by: James Hold on Jan. 29, 2017 :
Disagree with previous reviewer. The writing is not dreadful and is easy enough to understand. That said, it could use an overhaul. Difficulty arises when the author throws in a bunch of lots of internal dialogue and footnotes buried in brackets that tend to jumble the tale. These stylistic tricks distract from the narrative and interrupt the flow. Still it isn't all that bad and if the author is attempting to be original, then he definitely succeeded.
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Review by: petepee1111 on Jan. 27, 2017 :
Dreadful writing. Not sure if English is the writer's first language, but even if it isn't, everything is wrong with the story telling and punctuation, too. I'm no writer, but this is less than a first draft, I think.
A boy and his dad are playing catch, but the writer has the Dad think something just before it happens, or just before he says it, and then the conversations are like pretend chatter.
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