Just another wandering author. A little dirtier than the rest.
on Aug. 13, 2011 :
I don't agree with the other review that this was dreadful. I like stories about masturbation, I guess. :) Like a lot of books I review here, I got them for free. I am very, very surprised that so many people think you should charge money for something so short. A dollar is a dollar! I can buy full size novels at Amazon for that. I would not recommend paying for this. If it was longer, then maybe. But I still liked it. I like how the author talks about how much he likes "playing."
(reviewed 19 days after purchase)
on July 25, 2011 :
Dreadful. This short story was riddled with typos and editing issues. Going beyond that, this was just a waste of time. The author's constant description of "playing" as a euphemism for masturbation is quite annoying and absolutely nothing was stimulating to me. I just shook my head and was glad I got this one for free.
(reviewed 21 days after purchase)