The Fall of the Illistarta

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In a fantasy world, a journal is found describing events either real or myth about a nation known only as the Illistarta and how they came to be forgotten. A man once known as Quillis Olgatin is haunted by his guilty secret.
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About David Goodall

In a unique and obscure descision I have managed to actually say something good about myself. Being someone with Asberger's Syndrome it tends to be difficult to fully express myself or feel comfortable with crowds. I do, however find it great for allowing my creative side out once in a while as thoughts start spanning into complicated webs of ideas. Although I am new to writing, I have been working on a novel for the entirety of my teenage life and it will be out soon once I am happy that it is finished.
One of my flaws is that I can be a bit impatient so I tend to make rushed work out of the pressures of my life around me.
Please read my work and comment/review it to give me hints and tips on becomming a better writer.

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Review by: Rainy on July 13, 2011 :
Interesting concept, but could have used some polishing. Needed a proofread and some work on the dialogue. Probably would have been more entertaining if the narrator's involvement was revealed closer to the end instead of so close to the beginning. Would have left some intrigue. I do like the idea of a soul forge though, and would be interested in reading a full length novel about it, once the author hones his craft a little more.
(reviewed 2 days after purchase)
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