on Aug. 28, 2018 :
This is a stand alone story in the world of Alaria it is not necessary to read any previous stories in this setting. The introduction makes it clear what the world is like, why its like it and what the title rings do, so you can jump straight in.
Our main character is Sasha a tomboyish knight in shinning armour, she is from the sisterhood on a mission to rid the world of the corruption from Elduni. She is accompanied by Warrek the travelling Bard who has his own selfish desires to be journeying with her. What follows is a brief series of events that sees her humiliated and subjugated. Philo Hunter has a number of erotic themes befall her including, mind manipulation, breast growth, piercings, milking.
The writing is well written in a third person style with no glaring errors. Nothing takes you out of your fantasy than seeing childish spelling and grammar mistakes.
I was very pleased with the writing, the story moves at a brisk pace, keeping the events coming. I enjoyed reading of Sasha and her unfortunate luck. From start to finish its clear she won’t be coming back from her adventure but the writer is skilled enough to make me enjoy the journey more than the destination.
My biggest problem is the very little world building. There is a clear established world but Elduni the big villain takes a minor role compared to Warrek the travelling bard. We are told there are a number of different themed brothels in Elduni’s land and that they are even vital to her rule by supplying her income. We never see or even get a mention of what these other brothels are like. Its very contained is my problem.
The story was also written with fan polls this is fine at first and even allows it to have fun unexpected events happen but by the end I feel these fan polls really got in the way of the adventure and the characters.
The story is a simple small scale plot. Perfect for a quick easy read with much erotic misfortune.
I very much enjoyed this and for £1 its hard not to recommend it to erotic fantasy lovers.
(reviewed 12 months after purchase)