on June 4, 2017 :
On the plus side, suspense does build up on, the locations feel real and the writing gets smoother as the plot advances.
On the critical side, the book could have done with a little round of editing (or beta reading and rewriting) before publishing. Some word repeats, typos and creative grammar interfere with reading pleasure.
Might also be an idea to add the "young adult" tag. The student characters are the ones that come alive. The superpower plot does call for sequels that will speak to young readers. Or viewers, if it goes screen.
(review of free book)