on Aug. 07, 2017 :
Good idea, but the execution could be much better.
"Something lurking in the dark woods" is definitely my kind of horror story and it starts off really well, but quickly a few things got on my nerves.
The writing is at times repetitive, same expression used over and over again, there are continuency problems (he is back on the track, then back at the tent only to be back on the track again) and there's too much tell instead of show (he drives onto the parking lot, he gets out of his car, etc.)
Also, when his boss tells the authorities that they have nothing to do with him: Why? What consequences would it have had for the group? Why would they be held responsible for what he does or where he goes?
Having said all that, as mentioned, the idea is very good and the cover image is absolutely fabulous.
(review of free book)