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I have been writing erotica online since 1999. I am new to Smashwords, but looking forward to this new means of publication.
on Oct. 07, 2017 :
Sci-Fi stories set in a dystopic future are a favorite of mine and have been for a long time. However this one doesn't really work for me.
The paragraphs are all bunched together in big blocks. That may work in a traditional book, but it makes this story difficult for me to read. While there were some moments of heat during the processing and conditioning stages, there wasn't a lot of detail to it.
Overall there is very little heat, with only one brief sex scene at the end as far as I can tell. Also there isn't much emotion, nor much in the way of who these characters are. This makes it harder for me to care about them in any way. Did these protestors have friends? A family? Loved ones? I don't know. If the answers are in the story I probably missed them because of the difficulty in reading it.
(reviewed the day of purchase)