Astral - Night 1

Rated 3.50/5 based on 2 reviews
A young man wakes up in the middle of the night with his whole body paralyzed. As he is unable to move he notices another presence in his bedroom with him, a shadowy figure. The shadow confronts the young man and discusses with him of another world.
This is the first installment of a short story series.
(P.S. I'm a broke college student $0.99 would be really helpful)

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About Khalil Akil

I write stuff, I'm not that good at it, but I'm attempting to get better by writing more. As well, if possible, I'd like to get paid for the stuff I write. So you know, help me out. Also please leave reviews.

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Review by: Conrad Abong Franco, Jr on Dec. 25, 2017 :
Astral - Night 1 by Khalil Akil

It's been a long time now that I have not experienced the sleep paralysis and even sometimes the astral projection but your story interests me so much for I really wanted more about the astral plane. This book will surely help anyone who is experiencing the same phenomenon. For me, it is not a thing to be feared of. You just need to relax, explore and always think of going back to your body but being extra careful is always my recommendation. Brilliant book!

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Review by: Allister Remm on Oct. 8, 2017 :
From reading this I believe that English is not this author's native language. So my review is going to be based on that.

A reasonable attempt at a well flowing story was made. There is the beginning of an interesting story here, but it abruptly ends. It seems like there is supposed to be more, like the author started out intending to write more before abruptly ending their story.

My advice to this author would be to seek out a friend who can help them edit and develop their story ideas. Getting to know a copy editor who is well versed in English would also be a great idea.
(reviewed the day of purchase)
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