If I Say Yes (Love & Alternatives #1)
- Series: Love & Alternatives
By Neha Yazmin
Rated 3.00/5 based
on 1 reviews
You know the story where the girl-next-door-type is getting married to a jerk – and she's only marrying him because she's given up on finding Mr. Right – only for the man of her dreams to walk into her life days before the wedding?
This is not that story.
My story does however, include a man I'm going to marry and a man that...
You'll find out soon enough... More
This is not that story.
My story does however, include a man I'm going to marry and a man that...
You'll find out soon enough... More
Price:
Free!
- Series: Love & Alternatives
- Category: Fiction » Romance » Contemporary
- Category: Fiction » Women's fiction » Chick lit
- Published: Nov. 11, 2017
- Words: 128,120
- Language: English
- ISBN: 9781370139231
About Neha Yazmin
Neha Yazmin graduated from University College London (UCL) with a degree in Psychology and now lives in London with her husband and baby son. She writes both contemporary romance and paranormal urban fantasy romance. She is currently working on a number of projects.
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About the Series: Love & Alternatives
A contemporary romance series set in London.
Reviews
Review by:
Cleo Wodehouse
on Sep. 2, 2018 :
+ I appreciated being taught about the Bengali culture.
+ I came to love Seb. His pain was very well portrayed.
- Seb's sudden feelings for Shell seemed unrealistic to me. Shell comes across as a control freak, a fact which Seb laments initially. I don't see what changes his view of her. Karaoke can't be enough.
- The line breaks were confusing sometimes since it was the same speaker talking. Also, many of the italics were unnecessary for cultural terms after they had been introduced and repeated many times.
- Seb feels accepted by Shell. In what way? Just because she said IN THEORY she accepts his burns?
All in all, there was just too little plot and character building for me.
+ I appreciated being taught about the Bengali culture.
+ I came to love Seb. His pain was very well portrayed.
- Seb's sudden feelings for Shell seemed unrealistic to me. Shell comes across as a control freak, a fact which Seb laments initially. I don't see what changes his view of her. Karaoke can't be enough.
- The line breaks were confusing sometimes since it was the same speaker talking. Also, many of the italics were unnecessary for cultural terms after they had been introduced and repeated many times.
- Seb feels accepted by Shell. In what way? Just because she said IN THEORY she accepts his burns?
All in all, there was just too little plot and character building for me.
(review of free book)