There's a quagmire of emotion in this short story. It makes you think about how oddly balanced life can be. It's a short story and exceeds in detail (I think) and I like how the characters aren't completely exposed/over-developed-it's what makes this author unique. Yes, there's some sex in here, but it's not excessive, in fact, how it's described is fascinating. It does state that this author writes only first drafts, so yeah, there's errors with editing, but dammit, this author has superb skill and despite the first draft issues, I've never read anything that holds my attention like his stories.
(review of free book)