So I read you're short story and I really, really liked it. I thought it was really well written and you got into the Robert character pretty well. The only thing I think I would have liked is if you had explained more about how Layla committed suicide. If Robert was so obsessed with his friend's suicide I would think that he would think about how exactly she did it. I know I did that when a friend of mine committed suicide.
Other than that I thought it was a great short story and you are a very talented writer.
(review of free book)