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Rated 3.50/5 based on 4 reviews
2098 ... Decades after ecological ravages and political upheaval. The human race lives under a one-world Republic, dependent on a computer program, the I-sphere, to feed them life. Shane Carson, a soldier for the Republic, is visited by images from a life he did not live. Shane journeys to find the truth about his own life and this system, while his life turns over and chaos waits to erupt. More
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Review by: H. Writer on Dec. 19, 2018 :
I'm glad this was a free book. The plot was interesting and exciting, but the writing was atrocious! I made notes of 152 of the worst examples, but there were so many more! It was overly wordy and confusing to read; horrible sentence construction; saying "turning over" when he/she obviously meant "turning around"; using "by" when on, in, at or to would have been correct; the book takes place in the USA, the characters are all American, but there were so many British terms it was annoying. And committing the cardinal sin of writers: Mixing his characters names up!

I can't help but wonder if the writer is still in grade school.

Advice: Get yourself an editor or ask your English teacher to help before you publish another book. You have good vision, but are a long way from being an author.
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Review by: bsquiggle on Sep. 6, 2018 :
The premise is good, and there are some good ideas. However, overall it's let down by a lack of editing and proof reading as well as some seriously implausible time frames.
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Review by: bigballs56452 on June 21, 2018 :
Had me hooked all the way.
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Review by: AZWQ123 on June 14, 2018 :
This is a genuinely entertaining, fast-paced, interesting read. I would recommend this to fans of cyberpunk/sci-fi/dystopian novels as well as fans of good novels in general.
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