Perhaps you have downloaded this short story ... and read it
In any case, thank you very much for your interest. I only hope that you enjoyed the read as much as I did the writing!
If you want to leave a message or give some feeddback, I'd be deligthed to hear from you!
mail address: email@example.com
on May 19, 2011 :
An interesting take on the loss of Eden. I found myself captured by the opening scene of a young couple finding a pear orchard. And I was further intrigued by the threatening darkness of chemical-poisoned apples. But I wanted more. When the writer left the story to conclude with a homily about maturity, I was lost, not in an orchard but at a dead end to a promising story. Maybe revise it with more development of the characters and theme.
(review of free book)