The Doll

If you see & read a lot of horror stories you know that spirits, children and dolls are very used as scary elements. 'The Doll' has all tree combined, creating a super creepy vibe right from the start. The story has a good pace but the end didn't surprised me althought it wasn't bad, just predictable. For me what's refreshing and different is the whole cultural/religious background, which I didn't know anything about and really liked to learn.

What a wonderful short story! This book was recommended to me by someone who loves horror stories, and it was not a disappointment. The combination of religion / magic, small children and dolls - why are dolls so scary? - makes this a pretty creepy story. So, if you are looking for a small, scary story, this is the one for you.

The Doll, by J.C. Martin is a wonderfully written shorty story, full of believable characters. Ms. Martin pulls the reader easily into the relationship between Taylor and Joyce from the first page. Highly recommended read.

This was a good little story. I was disappointed in the length of the book. I felt there could of been more to it. Over all it was a good read. Not a 5 star in my opinion

This was a very interesting book, and I reacommend it to anyone who wants a good read.

I really enjoyed this short story. It was engaging and beautifully written, with an unexpected ending that raised the hairs on the back of my neck! Very atmospheric throughout, I was spellbound to the last page.

You may never look at your daughter's dolls in quite the same way again...

I must admit, I'm not a fan of horror. Frankly, it creeps me out. J.C. Martin is such a fabulous storyteller though that once I read the first page, there was no other option but to read the rest.

Joyce visits the Island of the Dolls, where corpse-like dolls are strung from trees. Creepy right? From there, Joyce's world slowly falls apart as she realizes a spirit from the Island has followed her and her daughter home.

I thought I had The Doll's ending pegged. That it would have a cliche ghost story ending, but boy was I wrong. The ending had me thrown for a loop that made me go bad and read the whole thing again.

Can't wait for more from Martin!

Good read. Recommend it for other horror writers.

"The Doll" had a few rough moments, specifically with participle tenses - I caught a few cases where "have lost" should have been "had lost", or using "may be" for a past scenario (should be "might have been"). There was also a passage where a set of quotation marks was missing, which gave me a little confusion as to the number of tour guides. (Additionally, the Spanish spoken by the native guide had a few mistakes as well; "munecas" should have been "muñecas" with a tilde, and as a feminine plural, the correct modifier is "las", not "la". "Trajineras" is a plural noun; if referring to only one canoe/gondola, "trajinera" should have been used instead.) Overall, though, the mistakes were quite minor and didn't merit much more than a brief pause.

Now, my favorite part - onto the good! First of all, this author has a real talent for description, creating imagery that you can experience in all five senses. The descriptions are both complex and succint, a winning combination that really brings the page to life. Take the following passage for example:

He heaved his sunburnt bulk onto the rotting pier, the arthritic planks groaning and shivering in protest of his weight.

Or how about this?

Vines and weeds strangled the decomposing structure, dragging it into the earth, returning its elements back to nature.

Just superb! Great verb choice, sparse yet perfect adjectives, and a sense of movement throughout the entire passage that built dramatic tension.

Another thing I really liked about this work was the depiction of interpersonal relationships. The dynamic between mother and child was touching and true to life, and I could really empathize in the frustration between the mother and her ex - especially in scenes about parenting (not that I have children.)

Finally, I originally thought that the ending would be fairly easy to guess. I mean, it was pretty clear where the work was going, right? So I was pleasantly surprised by a twist ending that was both creepy and chilling!

All in all, I'd have to give this 4.2 stars. Great descriptions, a decent plot, in need of some more editing.

This story is like a rollercoaster, just as any good horror-story should be like.
It starts nice and slow, so that you almost miss the first glimpse of what lurks in the shadows or in the trees or in a creepy hut.
Then you think you are safe, only to stop reading for a moment when you realize your are not safe at all.
And once the ball gets rolling, it certainly keeps you on your toes!
I won't spoil the ending, but 5 stars should be proof enough that I found it brilliant.