I wanted to give this less than 3 stars but I did not want to be mean.
Ok, where to start? It reads like a middle school kid came up with the idea of writing a short zombie story. The dialogue between the characters is bad, like a C movie(which is worse than a B movie, which you probably figured out). The sentences are choppy, and sometimes things are very hard to follow, because of its simplicity. Not even talking about all of the ripoffs from popular zombie movies he copied, which ticked me off. Could he not come up with something on his own?
Overall, I was not impressed and bored with reading this. Glad I got it for free.
(review of free book)